Tuesday, April 04, 2006

why wisconsin grads suck at legal writing, part 3

Dear LR&W Prof,

In the comments at the end of the first draft of my brief, you wrote the following:

"Your writing style is, at times, less than concise."

If you can't tell me in a concise manner that I'm wordy, then why should I put any stock into anything you say? And furthermore, changing "because of" to "due to" does not make my writing more concise - it just eliminates a few characters.

Why don't you go back to the Political Science department and leave the rest of us alone before you cause irreparable damage?

Thanks,
Me

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