why wisconsin grads suck at legal writing, part 3Dear LR&W Prof,
In the comments at the end of the first draft of my brief, you wrote the following:
"Your writing style is, at times, less than concise."
If you can't tell me in a concise manner that I'm wordy, then why should I put any stock into anything you say? And furthermore, changing "because of" to "due to" does not make my writing more concise - it just eliminates a few characters.
Why don't you go back to the Political Science department and leave the rest of us alone before you cause irreparable damage?